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only 20% of Tech Jobs are Held by Women. What problems do women face that prevent them from getting these jobs and what must be done to change this situation

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According to the information that technology-based jobs are acquired by only 20percent of women. Those issues provide that it is a hard profession for girls.
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, that misunderstand situation should be cleared from fundamental education from school and change parents’ approach for their children.
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 of all, the majority of teachers expect that boys have a more technical mind than girls so that attitude influence the mass and changing
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 about technology. If some girls would not understand issue related gadgets, they might avoid solving the problem.
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,
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 school and society separate jobs with gender. If the technological subject attend students without separate gender, branch of technology has a woman than the current number.
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, parents tend to influence select major for girls because the majority expects nurse, doctor, teacher or lawyer might perfect fit for women.
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, engineering and technology-based professions would be chosen by man. These approaches have been dramatically affected to the selection of the major. Unfortunately, some professions have been removed in a technological era, even a basic
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 requirement
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 requirement for each major. In conclusion, quite few women do tech job because of the parent’s pressure and they have not enough
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 about the profession.
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 not only men's job. Technological
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 significant to the
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 successful career so people should educate and discover
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 science without distinguishing for gender.
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