You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate. Give reasons for your answer, and support your essay with ideas and examples from your own experience. You should write at least 250 words.
With regard to keeping finances calculative and secure for the future is more commendable option to lead a satisfactory
life
for some people. Meanwhile, some group of people believes that one
should lead his/her life
to the fullest and to do so there is no other alternative rather than investing capital in one
's desirable thing. But the possibility for both
the process are very different and result in variation to the destination of life
. So, both
the decision is good at the same time bad for various events of our life
. Thus
, it totally depends on the demand of the person from his life
that which path will be more beneficial for him. Now, we should look upon the possible outcomes for both
the ways of handling finances.
First
, let us come to the point of saving money
. Well, saving money
is a praise worthy decision in order to pursue our dreams. We can ensure the security of our goals and big plans through savings. To quote Mark Bran " The biggest enemies of our life
are our bills, the more we owe ,
the more we stressAccept space
,
,
the more we stress the more our focus deviate from our goals". Accept space
,
Thus
we can see how the savings can relieve us from our stress. In addition
to this
fact, I would like to add that a short term loan can fulfil our small desires, but it confirms a handful of debt for our future. On the other hand
, if we could sacrifice these small desires and save finances
Accept comma addition
finances, then
then
we would be able to fund capital to buy our dream house. As far as I am concerned, everybody aims to secure a better life
for their next
generation and by saving money
they can ensure to grant such
life
to them. Again, it is a matter of fact that life
is very unpredictable and troubles can arise in our life
in different forms, such
as: pandemic, losing job suddenly, to repay a huge amount of loan all on
a sudden etc. Suggestion
of
This
obstacle might compel us to beg before any person for financial help which would hurt the honour of our family by a mark of disgrace. So, it's better to prepare before it's too late. And so our savings would help us to overcome such
obstacles and maintain our respect.
On the contrary
, to take this
advice on saving money
too seriously would put us down in front of everyone. Because our serious behaviour towards not spending money
would award us with frugal life
. We might lose friends and people may judge us for our cheap lifestyle. Moreover
,
there is only Accept space
,
one
life
and everyone should enjoy it according to their affording capacity. But the intense tendency to save money
will not allow us to enjoy our life
to the extend we could. Besides
, our objective to save maximum money
may deprive our nearest one
to get their fundamental requirements. As a consequence, it would create a bad image of ours to our family members. In addition
, we would bear a lifelong tension of how we could save more amount of salary.
To sum up with both
the arguments, it is clear that both
the mindset is useful and harmful at the same time. So, one
should give importance to balance both
the pathways and not to take any pathway so seriously that it would have a bad impact on our life
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