You have paid for a cricket course at a sports club, but due to some medical reason can not complete the entire course Write a letter to the course director of a sports club. In your letter, explain your interest in the course Describe your problems Find out if a refund is possible.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that due to my ongoing medical condition I am not able to complete the entire course of
cricket
for which I had already paid at your sports club. Since childhood, I have
an
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inclination towards
cricket
but because of my studies, I was not able to pursue it and now when I received a pamphlet of your sports club and scheduled my demo class for
cricket
I met with very good coaches and because of them, I got inspired to join
this
course. Unfortunately, while coming back from classes I came across
with
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an accident and I got injured my backbone. I was hospitalized for the previous 5 days and now after
discharged
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from the hospital my doctor advised me to have a proper bed rest along with home physiotherapy sessions, so it's not possible for me to complete the rest of the
cricket
course. As you are already aware of the hefty medical bills for hospitalisation and home physiotherapy treatment sessions, is it possible for me to get a refund for the unattended training sessions. I will be very thankful for your kind help. Yours faithfully Priyanka
slathia
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