You have paid for a cricket course at a sports club, but due to some medical reason can not complete the entire course Write a letter to the course director of a sports club. In your letter, explain your interest in the course Describe your problems Find out if a refund is possible.

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that due to my ongoing medical condition I am not able to complete the entire course of

cricket

for which I had already paid at your sports club. Since childhood, I have

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inclination towards

cricket

but because of my studies, I was not able to pursue it and now when I received a pamphlet of your sports club and scheduled my demo class for

cricket

I met with very good coaches and because of them, I got inspired to join

this

course. Unfortunately, while coming back from classes I came across

with

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an accident and I got injured my backbone. I was hospitalized for the previous 5 days and now after

discharged

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from the hospital my doctor advised me to have a proper bed rest along with home physiotherapy sessions, so it's not possible for me to complete the rest of the

cricket

course. As you are already aware of the hefty medical bills for hospitalisation and home physiotherapy treatment sessions, is it possible for me to get a refund for the unattended training sessions. I will be very thankful for your kind help. Yours faithfully Priyanka

slathia

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Submitted by priyanka slathia on Fri Jul 10 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

199 words

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