People have different views about government must motivate
national economy
Suggestion
the national economy
instead
of public supplies. In my opinion, I support the view that improving citizen’s lives is more significant than the former.
On the one hand, creating a worth-living environment in which people live in peace, justice and Linking Words
respectation
is a sustainable factor to develop Suggestion
Use synonyms
country
. It is the fact that a Suggestion
the country
country
, which has a well Use synonyms
education
, healthcare systems, always attracts many foreign investors and tourists leading to more profits than those political Suggestion
educated
unstability
. an unstable order
instability
instabilities
For example
, according to World Trade Organization’ record in 2010, Vietnam, a stable Linking Words
country
in the Southeast Asia, had earned annual more than $ 3 trillion with tourism. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the Middle East countries, which always experience in civil wars, became poorer and poorer because no one Linking Words
invest
in these internal unstable nations. The less Suggestion
invests
dispution
, the more revenue.
breaking up and scattering by dispersion
dissipation
On the other hand
, there are several reasons why Linking Words
authorities
should not concentrate much on national economy Suggestion
the authorities
instead
of Linking Words
improving their people
living standard. Suggestion
people improving their
First
, if a Linking Words
country
earns more money without developing their infrastructure, they would soon face to civil war because the distance between rich and poor civilian will be far. As an illustration, India is the Use synonyms
country
in which they don’t have any Use synonyms
skyscraper but
they include Accept comma addition
skyscraper, but
both of the richest
and the poorest person in the world. Suggestion
both the richest
Secondly
, people who were excellently educated and well Linking Words
healthy cared
are likely to work hard and get more taxes for government. Accept comma addition
healthy, cared
That is
, Linking Words
coutries
taking care more about social services will be returned by their citizens.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that government should a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
spent
more Suggestion
spend
effords
earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something
efforts
to
developing the infrastructure and national society because of the above reasons. Suggestion
in
on
This
will create a worth-living and powerful Linking Words
country
.Use synonyms
Phuong Nguyen