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In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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It is a common thing in a few countries for women to
work
 when their children are small. There are some negatives for
this
, which include not able to look after her
child
 and increase gap between mother and
child
.
This
also
 has positives of a working woman,
such
 as increased family income and more affordability in life.
This
 essay will discuss both. Let's begin with the advantages. There will be a significant
raise
a growth in strength or number or importance
rise
 in the family income if women are
also
 working. In
this
 current era, everything is becoming costlier day-by-day and single family income would not able to fulfil their needs.
However
, if both parents
work
, they can cover other expenses.
Secondly
, the mother can afford the study of their children via working. Needless to say, how expensive studies are. There are various fees,
such
 as school, tuition fees and other expenses
such
 as books,
this
 can only be afforded by a parent if the mother is
also
 working.
On the other hand
, it has many disadvantages as well.
Firstly
,
work
 tension can increase the gap between
mom
an adult person who is male (as opposed to a woman)
man
 and their baby. Due to
work load
work that a person is expected to do in a specified time
workload
, she would prefer to take rest rather than spending time with their children, which can increase the gap between them.
Secondly
, no one will be looking after her
child
 when she is in office;
consequently
this
 can lead
child
 to bad habits
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • workforce
  • economic benefits
  • standard of living
  • professional growth
  • career progression
  • social network
  • emotional support
  • role modeling
  • work-life balance
  • childcare costs
  • external childcare
  • additional income
  • emotional development
  • career opportunities
  • part-time roles
  • less demanding positions
  • juggling responsibilities
  • family environment
  • job satisfaction
  • financial security
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