One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
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traffic jam
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a traffic jam
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navigators, absence of barricades dividers etc.
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its the large vehicles, all the transportation of exports and imports have to be done during non peak hours or in the night time, if its done during day time especially in thye work time it occupies more space Linking Words
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effects the people who are travelling for work, usage of cars for a single person is Linking Words
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the government body is equally contributing in various ways, Linking Words
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travel in two wheelers in order to avoid occupying large space.Linking Words
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