You would like a temporary job working in a summer camp which runs sport and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organisers of the summer camp. In your letter: • Explain what sort of job you would like to do. • Describe your personality. • Say what experience and skills you have.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you
for
a temporary vacancy at a summer camp and I wonder if you can help me. The job which I would like to apply Change preposition
about
at
summer camp is Change preposition
for at
of
a chefChange preposition
as
,
because I can prepare numerous delectable dishes preferably for kids.
Being a chef is a suitable good job for me as I have crucial knowledge about the culinary arts.
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apply
Also
, I strongly believe that food brings people together and cooking always gives me immense pleasure. I also
love to try different continental recipes. On of that, I can prepare a lot of desserts which will be a treat for the children with a sweet tooth. Hence
, this
position is appropriate for a person who loves cooking.
As it is clear from my curriculum vitae I have certification in cooking and baking from the cooking Institution of Pakistan. I also
won two cooking competitions held in Karachi and Islamabad respectively. Currently
I am Add a comma
,Currently
also
doing an online baking course from
a very renowned chef. Change preposition
with
Additionally
, I have all the knowledge about food quality, food nutrients, health & hygeine
and ingredient selection. I will be available immediately for a meeting Correct your spelling
hygiene
as per
your earliest convenience.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Rabia YousafChange preposition
at
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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