Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often considered that

government

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the government

spend

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spends

money

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to make people lives better in terms of

theday

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the day

to day life rather than wasting

money

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art

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facility.

Linking Words

however I

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However, I

However I

am fully disagree

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fully disagree

with

this

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opinion.

First

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of all,

refers to the speaker or writer

believe that the

art

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is some one's intellectual which has to always be supported by government.

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addition

to make

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to making

community more beautiful and cheerful.

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for

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For

example singing is king of

art

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which does not

persued

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pursue

pursued

parsed

perused

by every one.

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that

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That

for

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from

this

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point of

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view, more

money

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spending is worth it.

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further

Suggestion

Further

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by creating

art

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complex people can use

there

of them or themselves

their

liesure

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

lesser

time by doing some

art

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work.

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is ultimately affect

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has ultimately affected

ultimately affects

the well being of

community

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the community

communities

a community

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keeps the people busy in some productive way.

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for

Suggestion

For

instance an individual

spend

Suggestion

spends

his off work time in sport

complex which

Accept comma addition

complex, which

can help him to discover their hidden skills and speciality. To conclude,

refers to the speaker or writer

strongly disagree that

government

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the government

must invest some

money

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art

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and

culturel

of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors

cultural

culture

activity not only public services.

because

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Because

it will make

changesin

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changes in

world

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the world

ultimately.

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Word Count

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A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural enrichment
expression of creativity
promote diversity
enhance social cohesion
boost tourism
job creation
stimulate economic growth
improve quality of life
essential services
maintenance and development

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