It is argued by some that
is becoming more prevalent
exposure to
displayed on TV and over computer
. It is true that
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of
could have negative psychological impacts,
, I tend to think that poverty has contributed more to the increased number of crimes.
On the one hand, most computer
and movies on TV contain violent scenes,
undeniably causing some intense psychological problems.
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, especially when its viewer is not an adult.
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and on TV makes children believe that carrying out acts of aggression is not only easy but
acceptable to society.
, teenagers and adolescents are often on target in terms of video
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. By getting exposed to explicit videos and
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young people are highly likely to try implementing some of these acts in real life,
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with guns, or even injuring someone. Even though exposure to violent images can lead them to commit an illegal action,
factor cannot be linked to the increased
rate.
The foremost reason why people are committing more and more
is that, in many countries, life under straitened circumstances has
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a major problem for several decades.
, unemployment is
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cause of most crimes since it exacerbates poverty. Two broad research programs
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year, both reaching the conclusion that over 70% of criminals had offended in order to earn money for their living.
, in many parts of the world, children do not have
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access even to elementary school. Given that it is far-fetched to expect an uneducated person to become proficient
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field, one will probably struggle to find a well-paid job unless they get quality education. Apart from those, not all countries can provide adequate job opportunities for their citizens, even for those who have attained a level of high education.
, lacking money to fulfil basic necessities
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decent housing, the poor are bound to steal or commit other serious crimes for their livelihood.
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media and in computer
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contribution to turning individuals into criminals,
is my view that criminality is rising
poor living conditions.