With a fast pace of moder life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantagesh outweight the disadvantages.

As the need of
money incresing
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money, increasing
money increasing
every day in our life, more people's life turning to hectic. And to avoid some problems like feeding
they
objective case of they
them
choosing to consume
junk
food
because of the way that they prepared, fast and simple.
However
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However, this
this
can have both advantages and drawbacks. Regarding positive sides of
this
trend, we can count on
couple
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a couple
of reasons why
this
is
choice
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the choice
of most people like time-saving and tasty.
Firstly
, time management of most people is short for breakfast, lunch and dinner. So, for
this
we can have very small number of
choice which
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choices, which
choices which
is mostly preferred one, fast
food
. We can order it in small cafes or make it
ourself
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
in about 2
minuts
a written account of what transpired at a meeting
minutes
by putting ready-ingredients together. And even we can take it and eat
this
on the move, in the public or private transport and during walking,
for example
.
Secondly
, it is true that home-made foods are always delicately made and
also
in restaurants there are a
lots
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lot
of delicious meals. But fast foods are
also
not tasteless, the ingredients of its recipe is mostly matching including meat, bread, cheese and others.
That is
why is preferred not only by people with
shortage
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a shortage
of time, but
also
children of
modern world
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the modern world
.
However
, there are
also
negatives to consider,
for example
the harm which it can bring to our organism. And it can
also
cause memory and learning problems.
To begin
with, several recent research studies have shown that fast foods have increased childhood obesity, heart diseases and diabetes and other chronic diseases. The more
junk
food
we consume, the less likely we are to consume the essential nutrients that our body relies on. Another thing to consider would be the harm that it brings to some of our brain
system
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systems
. To illustrate, if one eats 5 days only
junk
food
he is likely to perform poorly on cognitive tests that measured attention, speed and mood. It concluded that eating
junk
food
for just five days regularly can deteriorate our memory.
Finally
, as we are
addicting
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addicted
to eat
this
, it is making us impatient and can cause uncontrollable cravings and lessens our ability to control appetite. To conclude, I am totally agree with the idea that, we should mostly pay attention to its harm, and the disadvantages of fast
food
can come over of the advantages. It can always work
to
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for
our sake if we control our diet and consume less
junk
food
. And parents
also
should control their
children
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child's
children's
diet, even they should put restrictions to consume
this
by teaching and showing all harms of
this
in our health.
Submitted by Mirjahon Islomov on

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