With a fast pace of moder life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantagesh outweight the disadvantages.
As the need of
money incresing
every day in our life, more people's life turning to hectic. And to avoid some problems like feeding Accept comma addition
money, increasing
money increasing
they
choosing to consume objective case of they
them
junk
food
because of the way that they prepared, fast and simple. However
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However, this
this
can have both advantages and drawbacks.
Regarding positive sides of this
trend, we can count on couple
of reasons why Suggestion
a couple
this
is choice
of most people like time-saving and tasty. Suggestion
the choice
Firstly
, time management of most people is short for breakfast, lunch and dinner. So, for this
we can have very small number of choice which
is mostly preferred one, fast Suggestion
choices, which
choices which
food
. We can order it in small cafes or make it ourself
in about 2 reflexive form of "you"
yourself
minuts
by putting ready-ingredients together. And even we can take it and eat a written account of what transpired at a meeting
minutes
this
on the move, in the public or private transport and during walking, for example
. Secondly
, it is true that home-made foods are always delicately made and also
in restaurants there are a lots
of delicious meals. But fast foods are Suggestion
lot
also
not tasteless, the ingredients of its recipe is mostly matching including meat, bread, cheese and others. That is
why is preferred not only by people with shortage
of time, but Suggestion
a shortage
also
children of modern world
.
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the modern world
However
, there are also
negatives to consider, for example
the harm which it can bring to our organism. And it can also
cause memory and learning problems. To begin
with, several recent research studies have shown that fast foods have increased childhood obesity, heart diseases and diabetes and other chronic diseases. The more junk
food
we consume, the less likely we are to consume the essential nutrients that our body relies on. Another thing to consider would be the harm that it brings to some of our brain system
. To illustrate, if one eats 5 days only Suggestion
systems
junk
food
he is likely to perform poorly on cognitive tests that measured attention, speed and mood. It concluded that eating junk
food
for just five days regularly can deteriorate our memory. Finally
, as we are addicting
to eat Suggestion
addicted
this
, it is making us impatient and can cause uncontrollable cravings and lessens our ability to control appetite.
To conclude, I am totally agree with the idea that, we should mostly pay attention to its harm, and the disadvantages of fast food
can come over of the advantages. It can always work to
our sake if we control our diet and consume less Suggestion
for
junk
food
. And parents also
should control their children
diet, even they should put restrictions to consume Suggestion
child's
children's
this
by teaching and showing all harms of this
in our health.Submitted by Mirjahon Islomov on
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