The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Internet
Suggestion
The internet
has surely transformed our lives forever. About 50 years back, there was no
way
to know what was going on in different parts of the
world
, and we would have to rely on daily newspapers for the news to reach us once a day in the morning.
This
essay discusses the pros and the cons of the
internet
, in relation to, if and how it has affected our thought process and changed our behavioural patterns, while adding
values
Suggestion
value
to the
way
we live and the economy. The
world
was a different place before the
internet
, which
also
meant that people lived a slow, mundane and enclosed
existance
the state or fact of existing
existence
interacting only with their own circle and communities. The exposure to different cultures and thoughts was limited, but that
also
meant, you could differentiate each one due to their uniqueness. The advent of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
brought about a massive change. The
world
felt smaller than it was and people were exposed to different opinions and voices. Over time, came social media and with it brought more
socio
relating to human society and its members
social
and cultural exchange. We were highly exposed to
different
Suggestion
a different way
different ways
way
of thinking day in and day out. With that kind of exposure scholars, experts and
influencers
could share their opinions easily and influence others with their words and behaviour. Though the
internet
brought about a huge change in how we live, it
also
meant somewhere it started diluting the individual
way
of life. Economic exchange of goods and products was made available which helped flourish various nations. But it
also
meant anybody had the access to the same thing around the
world
. The cross
polination
transfer of pollen from the anther to the stigma of a plant
pollination
of products and ideas started blurring the lines of
indivisuality
the quality of being individual
individuality
. Now it is very tough to differentiate between people from various nations, because they all look the same and have
similar thought process
Suggestion
a similar thought process
.
Internet
Suggestion
The internet
has not only blurred the lines of culture, it is slowly influencing the ideas of people around the
world
. In
conclusion I
Accept comma addition
conclusion, I
feel and I agree that thought
internet added
Accept comma addition
internet, added
value to our lives and increased our spending power, unfortunately it has not only blurred the lines of culture but it is slowly influencing the thoughts of people around the
world
. We should take note of
this
change before it is too late to realise that we all have turned into a replica of each other and there is not difference left.
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