The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Internet

Suggestion

The internet

has surely transformed our lives forever. About 50 years back, there was no

way

to know what was going on in different parts of the

world

, and we would have to rely on daily newspapers for the news to reach us once a day in the morning.

This

essay discusses the pros and the cons of the

internet

, in relation to, if and how it has affected our thought process and changed our behavioural patterns, while adding

values

Suggestion

value

to the

way

we live and the economy. The

world

was a different place before the

internet

, which

also

meant that people lived a slow, mundane and enclosed

existance

the state or fact of existing

existence

interacting only with their own circle and communities. The exposure to different cultures and thoughts was limited, but that

also

meant, you could differentiate each one due to their uniqueness. The advent of

internet

Suggestion

the internet

brought about a massive change. The

world

felt smaller than it was and people were exposed to different opinions and voices. Over time, came social media and with it brought more

socio

relating to human society and its members

social

and cultural exchange. We were highly exposed to

different

Suggestion

a different way

different ways

way

of thinking day in and day out. With that kind of exposure scholars, experts and

influencers

could share their opinions easily and influence others with their words and behaviour. Though the

internet

brought about a huge change in how we live, it

also

meant somewhere it started diluting the individual

way

of life. Economic exchange of goods and products was made available which helped flourish various nations. But it

also

meant anybody had the access to the same thing around the

world

. The cross

polination

transfer of pollen from the anther to the stigma of a plant

pollination

of products and ideas started blurring the lines of

indivisuality

the quality of being individual

individuality

. Now it is very tough to differentiate between people from various nations, because they all look the same and have

similar thought process

Suggestion

a similar thought process

Internet

Suggestion

The internet

has not only blurred the lines of culture, it is slowly influencing the ideas of people around the

world

. In

conclusion I

Accept comma addition

conclusion, I

feel and I agree that thought

internet added

Accept comma addition

internet, added

value to our lives and increased our spending power, unfortunately it has not only blurred the lines of culture but it is slowly influencing the thoughts of people around the

world

. We should take note of

this

change before it is too late to realise that we all have turned into a replica of each other and there is not difference left.

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Some people say that the academic success of students depends on the quality of their teachers. Others think it depends on the personal commitment and attitude of the students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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