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🔶The consumption of the world’s resources (oil and water, etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. 🔸What are causes and solutions?

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The world's natural resources
is being used
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are being used
 in a rapid speed. There are several reasons
of
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for
this
 trend which can be solved by a number of workable proposals. In the following essay we inspect some causes and
also
 solutions. One of the major causes of high level consumption of natural resources
such
 as oil and water is increasing demand in domestic, industrial, agriculture, to name a few, parts because of the growth in population. Based on the existing statistics merely a small share of
this
 shortage is related to domestic consumption of water and oil, a huge amount of them is either used or polluted by agricultural and industrial activities. Another common cause which is related to these resources is that despite the fact that our methods in agriculture and industry are very old and
expired we
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expired, we
 do not pay attention about the danger we may
face even up
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even face up
 to
few decades
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a few decades
. The most important course of action to address
this
 issue is to change the conventional methods in agriculture and industrial activities.
For
example using
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example, using
 new ways of
irrigation which
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irrigation, which
 led to decrease the amount of water usage in these parts. Another workable solution is renewable energies which are safe, clean and
economically
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economical
 and
can be take
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can take
 the place of fossil fuels.
For
example if
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example, if
 hybrid cars be cheaper people will be keener to buy them. In conclusion, I believe it is necessary
to
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for
 us to save the natural resources as far as possible. Industrial and agricultural activities are more responsible in lessen of the Worlds resources and they should innovate their methods and
also
government
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the government
 should put action to address the problems.
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