The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit?  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In recent years, there are several methods to pay for something and the discussion whether to
use
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cash or
credit
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card
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are still going on. Even though cards are still a new
methods
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method
of paying, but I prefer to
use
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credit
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cards rather than cash to buy things.
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with, there are many reasons why
credit
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cards are used nowadays.
Credit
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cards are suitable to pay something
that is
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expensive. People who bring
credit
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card
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do not need to bring
many
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
paper money that
carry
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carries
it in a big amount can make our belongings heavier.
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,
cards
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the cards
are small things which can be brought easily and it does not occupy many
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spaces
in bags. It can be kept in people's pocket or just bring it
with
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by
hand.
Credit
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cards
are
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also benefit
also
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benefit from its security. When people need to pay with cards, they need to press their pin that they settle before the transaction are successfully made.
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, by using
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cards as a mean to pay, people
do not need
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did not need
to pay directly at that time. Sometimes, when people buy something with their
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, they will get charged in the
next
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month which on the
next
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billing settlement.
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, all the people
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are
wealth
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wealthy
or
poor can
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poor, can
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this
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mean to buy something that they want
first
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and they can pay it later.
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, many outlets in the world already accept the usage of
credit
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cards, so people do not need to worry about whether the shop will accept it or not. In conclusion, I believe it is better to
use
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credit
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a credit card
card
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rather than cash because of its advantages in the way to bring it, its security, its acceptance, and
to buy
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buy
now
then
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pay later.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • security benefits
  • fraud and theft protection
  • credit score
  • financial products
  • rewards programs
  • cashback
  • budgeting
  • tracking expenses
  • overspend
  • debt accumulation
  • interest payments
  • universal acceptance
  • privacy
  • financial benefits
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