Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Civilization has
impact
Suggestion
impacted
the nature in the different ways.
Increase
Suggestion
An increase
in the population, leads to usage of land which has
direct indirect
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direct, indirect
effect on the living hood and plants. Some persons believe that
this
situation can be handled and others think that it is out from human hands.
This
is a moot topic and needs attention. In my subsequent crumb of writing,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will portray both the facets of notion and conclude the essay with my opinion. The
first
school of thought claims that most of the animal and plant
specious
(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed
species
are near to end.
This
skyrocket utilization of forests, created
this
situation by which many animals do not have the required area for living as well as not suitable environment.
In addition
, demand of medicines and food is increasing day by
day which
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day, which
is leading to cut off
trees
Suggestion
the trees
and some plants.
Moreover
, until the number of people increasing in the world, it is a challenge for some organizations which are working to stop
this
trend.
However
, the opposite group of people deems that the officials of every country required to
imposed
Suggestion
impose
some strict rules for hunting and smuggling of
specuious
(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed
species
mammals.
Furthermore
, some organizations can begin programs to encourage citizens for planting trees.
For example
, In Canada, Honda company has started a policy in which they plant a tree for every single
sold vehicle
Suggestion
vehicle sold
. To add to it, government should preserve a large area of land in the country specially for plants and animals.
Moreover
, a restriction to be applied to construction and entrance in that area. I opine that the every creature on the earth have proper rights on every natural object. Breaking
this
cycle can put the
mandkind
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
mankind
into the devastation. To conclude, as per rising
necessasity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
of land it is difficult to stop
this
trend but
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trend, but
government
Suggestion
the government
and individuals of every country can work together to handle
this
situation for the betterment of
world
Suggestion
the world
.
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