You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter in regards to a

job

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I am going to apply

and

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for and

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for

that

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I required a letter of reference. I am applying for the

job

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, which is about L&T

company

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, the most prestigious

company

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the

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apply

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India. I am applying for the position of Jr Engineer. The project, which

this

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job

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involves is of the Mumbai Metro which will be a different experience of a kind.

This

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job

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is very much essential for me and for my future career. It was my dream to work in the L&T

company

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as it is the best

company

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to work in for a civil engineer. If I get

this

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position,

then

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it will be

path breaking

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in my future as getting a tag of L&T is considered

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of up

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up most

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upmost

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importance. I would like you to write letters of reference for me as

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apply

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I have completed my bachelors in civil under you and my project was under your supervision. It would be a great help to me! I would like you to write about my knowledge in the field, how good I was at

problem solving

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problem-solving

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. I am waiting for your reply.

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Yours

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Your

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sincerely Jay tank

jay tankMon Jul 27 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

199 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

reference letter
former teacher
job application
recommendation
career goals
professional development
academic performance
responsibilities
company
skills
qualifications
gratitude
support
aspirations
context
interaction
additional information
correspondence
tailor the reference
specific qualities

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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in water, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.