As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation?

People have welcomed computers as a means of making

work

easier. At the same

time

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time, however

however

, computers have

also

eliminated many jobs by making the human worker obsolete.

On the other hand

, the job performance of computers is often less than adequate. A

number

of jobs have been lost as a direct result of computer technology. Human

ticket

agents,

for example

, are virtually nonexistent these days. The

number

of

bank

tellers has

also

been greatly reduced due to automated

bank

machines.

Customer

service help lines are almost entirely automated. A few years ago, I worked as an assistant at a

library

. Today that position doesn'

t

exist because the

library

has installed computers that do most of the same

work

I did. The

number

of positions lost to computers continues to grow, along with unemployment. While computers can easily carry out routine tasks, they often fall short when a

customer

has  a unique request or problem. An automated

ticket

agent does not have insight about an entertainment district and

can not

can not

cannot

offer friendly directions to a tourist.

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People have welcomed computers as a means of making

work

easier. At the same

time

Accept comma addition

time, however

however

,

computers

a machine for performing calculations automatically

Computers

have

also

eliminated many jobs by making the human worker obsolete.

On the other hand

, the job performance of computers is often less than adequate. A

number

of jobs have been lost as a direct result of computer technology. Human

ticket

agents,

for example

, are virtually nonexistent these days. The

number

of

bank

tellers has

also

been greatly reduced due to automated

bank

machines.

Customer

service help lines are almost entirely automated. A few years ago, I worked as an assistant at a

library

. Today that position doesn'

t

exist because the

library

has

installed

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Installed

computers that do most of the same

work

I did. The

number

of positions lost to computers continues to grow, along with unemployment. While computers can easily carry out routine tasks, they often fall short when a

customer

has  a unique request or problem. An automated

ticket

agent doesn'

t

have insight about an entertainment district and can'

t

offer friendly directions to a tourist. An automated teller machine can'

t

provide assistance and reassurance when a

customer

's

bank

card has been stolen. And, more often than not, automated telephone operators can'

t

answer the one question we have, and we end up waiting on line to speak to a real person anyway. In the future, I believe a new

business

trend will evolve. As computers eliminate jobs, new positions will have to be invented. More and more people will go into

business

for themselves and, I hope, put the personal touch back into

business

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the business

. I believe that the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computers.

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Teller

machine can'

t

provide assistance and reassurance when a

customer

's

bank

card has been stolen. And, more often than not, automated telephone operators can'

t

answer the one question we have, and we end up waiting on line to speak to a real person anyway. In the future, I believe a new

business

trend will evolve. As computers eliminate jobs, new positions will have to be invented. More and more people will go into

business

for themselves and, I hope, put the personal touch back into the

business

. I believe that the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computers.