As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation?

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People have welcomed computers as a means of making
work
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easier. At the same
time
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time, however
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, computers have
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eliminated many jobs by making the human worker obsolete.
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, the job performance of computers is often less than adequate. A
number
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of jobs have been lost as a direct result of computer technology. Human
ticket
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agents,
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, are virtually nonexistent these days. The
number
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of
bank
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tellers has
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been greatly reduced due to automated
bank
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machines.
Customer
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service help lines are almost entirely automated. A few years ago, I worked as an assistant at a
library
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. Today that position doesn'
t
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exist because the
library
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has installed computers that do most of the same
work
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I did. The
number
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of positions lost to computers continues to grow, along with unemployment. While computers can easily carry out routine tasks, they often fall short when a
customer
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has  a unique request or problem. An automated
ticket
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agent does not have insight about an entertainment district and
can not
can not
cannot
offer friendly directions to a tourist.
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People have welcomed computers as a means of making
work
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easier. At the same
time
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time, however
however
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,
computers
a machine for performing calculations automatically
Computers
have
also
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eliminated many jobs by making the human worker obsolete.
On the other hand
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, the job performance of computers is often less than adequate. A
number
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of jobs have been lost as a direct result of computer technology. Human
ticket
Use synonyms
agents,
for example
Linking Words
, are virtually nonexistent these days. The
number
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of
bank
Use synonyms
tellers has
also
Linking Words
been greatly reduced due to automated
bank
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machines.
Customer
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service help lines are almost entirely automated. A few years ago, I worked as an assistant at a
library
Use synonyms
. Today that position doesn'
t
Use synonyms
exist because the
library
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has
installed
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Installed
computers that do most of the same
work
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I did. The
number
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of positions lost to computers continues to grow, along with unemployment. While computers can easily carry out routine tasks, they often fall short when a
customer
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has  a unique request or problem. An automated
ticket
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agent doesn'
t
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have insight about an entertainment district and can'
t
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offer friendly directions to a tourist. An automated teller machine can'
t
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provide assistance and reassurance when a
customer
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's
bank
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card has been stolen. And, more often than not, automated telephone operators can'
t
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answer the one question we have, and we end up waiting on line to speak to a real person anyway. In the future, I believe a new
business
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trend will evolve. As computers eliminate jobs, new positions will have to be invented. More and more people will go into
business
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for themselves and, I hope, put the personal touch back into
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business
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the business
. I believe that the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computers.
teller
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Teller
machine can'
t
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provide assistance and reassurance when a
customer
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's
bank
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card has been stolen. And, more often than not, automated telephone operators can'
t
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answer the one question we have, and we end up waiting on line to speak to a real person anyway. In the future, I believe a new
business
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trend will evolve. As computers eliminate jobs, new positions will have to be invented. More and more people will go into
business
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for themselves and, I hope, put the personal touch back into the
business
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. I believe that the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computers.
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