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Many young people today have their own mobile phone and believe it is essential for their lives. Other people dislike mobile phones and think that they are both a nuisance and an unnecessary luxury item. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these two points of view?

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The
use
 of
mobile
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mobile phones
the mobile phone
phone
 among young generation has been increased enormously. Considering
this
 fact,
mobile
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the mobile phone
phone
 has become a vital part of their life.
On the other hand
, there are some people who consider mobile phones as unnecessary luxury items
instead
 of essential facilitator.
Honestly as
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Honestly, as
 per my opinion, I strongly agree with the fact that now a day’s mobile phones have become the basic necessity of young students.
This
 essay will discuss that how mobile phones have made student’s life much easier and productive. I strongly disagree, with the view of considering mobile phones as non-essential item.
However
, there are some disadvantages for not using mobile phones
efficiently which
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efficiently, which
 will be highlighted
further
 in
essay
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the essay
an essay
. With the advancement of technology and easy access to internet, mobile phones have brought a revolutionary impact on
education industry
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the education industry
.
Mobile
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The mobile phone
phone
 has become a basic tool of
student
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the student
students
. In recent times,
academic progress
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the academic progress
 of
student
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the student
students
 is highly dependent on
use
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the use
 of mobile phones. It helps students to learn anything they want and at any point of time by browsing on
internet
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the internet
 or sharing study material with class fellows and teachers.
For example
, with the help of mobile
phone
 a student can call anytime to his
classmate
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class mate
 to seek help in writing thesis or an assignment. He can
also
 exchange many useful files with teachers using email or WhatsApp and get their immediate feedback on it. Like other
essentials
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essential
 items, having mobile become the main necessity of everyone’s life regardless of age. But, some people with
conservative mindset consider
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a conservative mindset, consider
a conservative mindset consider
, that having mobile
phone
 is a waste of money and time. Based on their view, mobile phones are luxury and
nonessential
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non essential
 items. Without a shadow of doubt, there are some flaws
for
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in
 the
use
 of mobile
phone
,
for example
, excessive
use
 of
phone
 can have a severe effect on eyesight.
Similarly
, unnecessary spending most of time on social media or playing games
all the
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all, the
 day long results in non-productive outcome. In conclusion, I am more inclined towards keeping and using the mobile phones for fruitful purposes.
Although
, there are some disadvantages but with the help of control measures these can be easily reduced to
minimal level
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minimal levels
a minimal level
. I strongly agree that in the world of technology, mobile phones and other technological devices will enhance the productivity of individuals.
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