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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods To what extend do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal

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It is evident that every
country
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 needs a plethora products to satisfy their
country
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 needs.
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, individual county responsibility to allocate adequate resources for survival. I agree with every
country
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 should put cumulative effort to increase their materials. In the following paragraph, I intend to delve into
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.
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 with, population in each
country
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 is growing by leap.
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, it is the responsibility of individual
country
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 to work towards implementing the different options to improve sourcing of goods. What I mean by
this
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, if there are multiple sources to manufacture products, we can alleviate the issues of material.
For example
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, a recent survey reported that Florida had a heavy flood in winter and a lot of people were dying because of less goods and material. If they had enough food stored, many would have survived from hungry. To put it in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
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 that, when there is a good amount of sources available, it will be helpful for any uncertainty or for any emergency.
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