A global trade increases between countries ,many daily necessities are produced in other countries .Such goods are usually transported a long distance .do the benefits of this trend outweigh it's drawbacks? Opinion,the advantage and disadvantages.

The import and export trade has made globally dependent for commodities of different types.The increase in the needs and demands of local people has fetch the imported goods to be transported locally.There is much benefit in adopting
such
system even though it's negatives cannot be neglected. Starting the benefits of transporting, the consumer items and goods from neighbouring countries makes local people taste the different country products like electronic devices or grocery items, eatables like fruits and vegetables.
For instance
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many necessary goods are imported from China to India like smart phones
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if the devices have not been imported from that country, the
then
Indian people have to be contented with local brands only.Nowadays
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fruits which we only able to taste in abroad, now we have the facility to buy locally.Like dragon fruit, different variety of grapes and wide range of dates
also
we are able to taste.
Moreover
, by commercializing goods globally develops a good relationship between countries which helps in less conflict as they are dependent for trade on each other. On the downside, importing goods can have a negative effect on the local market
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as a reason of higher tax would be imposed on goods, it becomes expensive compare to manufactured rate.
Secondly
the Goods which are made locally will be in loss due to public demand of imported items
as a result
our economic condition will fall. In my opinion benefits of.Imported goods outweigh compare to cons.
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