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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Women empowerment has been accepted by the various countries. Nowadays
,
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,
It has contributed a major role in
development
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the development
 of any nation. Some people are apparently of
opinion
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the opinion
 that women should be the part of different wings of military services
such
 as the army, the navy and the air force. I
also
 in
favor
promote over another
favour
 as their roles are vital. History has a number of evidences where women have shown significant work to support the plethora of tasks.
Thier
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Their
Through
 involvement in national defence services
will
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Will
 improve the overall system.
Moreover
, their
loyality
the quality of being loyal
loyalty
, self
confidenece
freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
 will definitely change the current culture. In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, they have wider abilities to
handel
be in charge of, act on, or dispose of
handle
 any pressure and decision power would
also
 enhance the traditional thoughts which have been followed by many reserved countries.
For example
, India has started recruiting young graduated women for the part of
navy force
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the naval force
naval force
a naval force
naval forces
. They will be given
rigorously
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rigorous
 training and placed a respectful position to serve the Indian Navy service.
For instance
, an
articel
nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication
article
 published -'The Times'- stated that more than 50% of women have passed their physical test and ready to join duties.
On the other hand
, It is
also
 undeniable that women have got a huge
responsibilities
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responsibility
 to manage their families.
Besides
, the sociability and discipline towards
society
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
Society
, they
also
 have too much health and body related complications.
Furthermore
, It is obviously challenging to
handel
be in charge of, act on, or dispose of
handle
 two roles and take care of
family
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the family
 and at the same time work for the nation.
This
 could be one of the reasons why
divorce rate
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the divorce rate
 has been found in increasing trend in the women
.
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.
 To illustrate, various studies conducted in the India revealed that out of 10 couples,
however
, 2 couples, got divorced due to the main factor of their roles
towards
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Towards
 military jobs. In a nutshell
,
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,
it is evident from the above discussions that women are the part of society and
then
 should have rights to join the services.
Nevertheless
, they
should
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Should
 be mentally ready to face any issues due to
this
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • combat roles
  • physical prowess
  • stamina
  • dynamics
  • cohesion
  • resilience
  • integration
  • gender disparities
  • morale
  • recruitment
  • retention
  • biological differences
  • stereotypes
  • feminism
  • glass ceiling
  • break barriers
  • pioneer
  • groundbreaking
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