1. Some people believe government should spend money on building trains and Subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Other than that building more and wider roads is the to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As the population grows, people won't extend Railway stand
road
Sinha order to reduce
traffic
. Say some suggest to widen the roads were largest want to build tomorrow
train se
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train, she
train she
Subway lines to reduce
traffic
.
Latest
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The latest
in my point of
view building
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view, building
more Reliance help to reduce the
traffic
A group of people
want
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wants
to buy the
road
for
traffic
reduction, it has both positive and negative sides. If the
road
extend
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extends
more vehicle can
travel but
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travel, but
the
traffic
will not reduce because the amount of vehicle increase but the
traffic
will not. In India many people with their houses and cultivate their lands beside the
road
so, is the
road
extent the houses and land has to be demolished. So practically it's
waste
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a waste
of money to build wider roads as per my opinion.
This
side of widening the roads is it will reduce accident.
Meanwhile some
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Meanwhile, some
think that building more trains and subways may reduce the
traffic
. In one
perception it
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perception, it
really helps to reduce the
traffic
and the ticket cost is less in
train
compared to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
vehicle. By building more
train
lines and
subways people
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subways, people
won't
stuck
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stick
in
traffic
and they can reach to the destination on
correct
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corrected
time. Building more subways and Railways neither create
traffic
nor pollution. As everything has both good and bad side building Railways tend to destroy
more agriculture
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more agricultural
land as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
already said people have their lands near roads as well as rail tracks. But as
an
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a
universal fact which is you can't gain anything without losing something. In order to reduce
traffic
people have to learn their lands to
government
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govern
. These
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
the views of two
set
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sets
of people on building
train
and
subways
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subway
lines and
also
roads. According to me building more Railways and subways will help to reduce
traffic
in the near future. And the money spent by the government will
also
be less compare with roads.
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