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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games.What are theadvantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

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Over the
last
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 two decades, playing
computer
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 games is increasing rapidly.Really in
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this
plural of "this"
these
 days children much hour spends Front of
computer
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 and
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 attractive for themselves. I am against, like many parents. With regards to the advantages, playing
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 games can develop children’s cognitive skills. Another good point is that when playing games, teenagers can feel relax and have fun. In fact, they might reduce their stress when playing many popular games with vivid imagery and sound effects
for example
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: Pugb, counter strike and others.These mobile and
computer
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 games are very famous in Uzbekistan. And games help at the same time give work with a team.
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, these games take many hours than our plan's time.
Computer
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 games distracting focus on study and
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fall
the lapse of mankind into sinfulness because of the sin of Adam and Eve
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 we more expensive.Usually children think games frequently and speaking about levels.
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Second problem
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 is lighting normal sit in front
computer
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 must be 60 Sm but many times we can see children don't follow that rule, especially in game point. If games have more kill, kick, stab and shoot that impact children's character they lead to with aggressive. In conclusion, there are benefits of
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 games, but there are disadvantages too. So parents need their children to focus more. Children should play games with under control of their parents.
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