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The maps below Show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962

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maps
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map
 shows us Meadowside
village
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 and Fonton
areas
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area's
area
 situation in three different
years which
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years, which
 were 1962,1985 and present. Overall Meadow side
village
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 and
fonton
American architect (1759-1828)
Thornton
 regions
lives
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live
 huge changes and these lands meet
in
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at
 present. In 1962, Meadow side
village
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 didn’t have any buildings and ways.
Fonton area
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The Thornton area
Thornton area
 has only one railway. Thirteen years
later so
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later, so
 in 1985
meadowside
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Meadowside
village
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 improved and added many infrastructures, settlements and territories.
Area
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The area
 was grown almost triple scales. The infrastructure of
meadowside
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Meadowside
 has two big roads. One big ways reached till
fonton
(mathematics) a mathematical relation such that each element of a given set (the domain of the function) is associated with an element of another set (the range of the function)
function
Thornton
fountain
 area and passed that land.
In addition
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, Housing estates, leisure complex and super store were built that land.
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Also Fonton area
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The also fountain area
Also fountain area
 seems bigger in 1985.
In
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At
 present, both lands met with each other.
he
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His
He
 water was
fulled
(usually followed by 'with' or used as a combining form) generously supplied with
filled
 with land. After
fulled
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fulling
 with lands these areas, Hotel, station and Business park were built and added one more railway. Business
park
a large area of land preserved in its natural state as public property
Park
 located in below and middle part of
map
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the map
. Business park has a connection with
highway
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highways
the highway
.
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Second railway beginning
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A second railway beginning
is reach
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has reached
reaches
 to
station
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the station
.
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