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You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay at your appartment.

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Dear Karina, Hope
this
 letter finds you well. It would be a pleasure for me to host you during your weekends. Unfortunately, I wouldn't be able to meet you personally as I with my girlfriend have planned our vacation for the dates you will arrive. We're going to Thailand for a month.
However
, you can feel free to live for a while in my flat. Let me explain how you can get there. My address is
klubnichui
 lane 27. It's a block of flats and could be easily recognized by supermarket called Objoba, it's in the same building. I suppose you will arrive to the railway station. There
are
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is
 a plenty of private taxi, but please, don't take them as they are quite expensive. You can catch a bus in front of the station, the suitable buses are 140, 254 and will take you directly to the address. Can you call my mother when you arrive by number 054523243, her name is Elena. She will be waiting for you and give you the keys. You can feel like at home. As you know, a cigarette smell drives me crazy, so I would ask you not to smoke.
Also
, could you do me a favour and take care of my puppet Juja. I'm going to prepare some food for her. We usually feed her twice a day, in the morning and in the evening after a walk. I know you are coming
for
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from
 the sea, I would suggest my favourite one called Golden Beach. It's about half an hour from my flat and the best time to visit it early in the morning until many tourists come there.
Also i
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Also, I
Also I
 would strongly suggest you to visit Park of Victory, it's quite close and fantastic place to spend some time on a bench and look to the lake witch make me relaxed. In case you get hungry, there are a lot of cafes around you can try plenty of dishes.
Be
a twilled woolen fabric
Serge
st regards, Sergii Zinkevych
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