As global trade increases, many goods, including those we use on a daily basis, are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distances. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks.

Nowadays, everyday products are predominantly manufactured abroad and shipped around the globe.
This
essay will outline two main reasons why
this
statement has more negative connotations
for
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in
the world, than positives.
Firstly
, international shipping is
such
a widespread service amongst businesses that consumers now have the option to buy almost anything from anywhere in the world.
This
means that they may not support a local high street business if they can obtain a similar item for cheaper, when made abroad.
This
is
such
a negative because it encourages cheap, and even at times child, labour.
For example
, online Chinese clothes stores
such
as
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are so popular because they sell unbelievably cheap clothing and deliver straight to your door. The ethics of these businesses have been raised on multiple news and social media platforms, but consumers still continue to support them. Even famous lawsuits alluding to
such
companies having sweatshops and poor working environments are not enough of a deterrent for the average consumer. It may be argued,
however
, that
this
sort of global market encourages businesses to be competitive. But morally, we must ask ourselves, at what cost?
Secondly
, carbon emissions from international deliveries provide another big disadvantage. As the infamous environmental activist Greta Turnberg will attest: ice caps are melting, the environment is being heavily polluted and the world must act now. Rather than acting now, we’re
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the act of changing or reversing the direction of the course
turning
turn
a blind eye to the realities of our actions.
Although
some goods are transported on the same aircrafts as those carrying people; the additional weight of
such
items, as well as the many, many planes solely carrying businesses’ merchandise
are
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is
overall bad for the Earth. Even though
such
international goods distribution could arguably be viewed as encouraging multiculturalism, as people are exposed to products from different countries,
this
is not sufficient justification for these actions. The lack of support for national businesses, promotion of unethical behaviour by businesses, as well as the major carbon footprint associated with transportation of goods
mean
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means
that the negatives of global goods distribution vastly outweigh the positives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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