Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue the parents should encourage their children to participate in organized group activities in their own leisure time. While others may argue that children must be able to figure out for themselves how to do it own their own. In

this

essay, it will be discussed the two points on how children should spend their free time and I will give

my

objective form of "I"

me

my opinion based on those

dicussions

an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic

discussions

decisions

. Children taking part in extracurricular activities in groups

such

as book clubs, singing or dancing classes

teaches

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teach

them to learn

values

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the values

of cooperation and acceptance of

diferences

the quality of being unlike or dissimilar

differences

which

thus

help them to develop harmonious relationships with others. It

also

gives them a sense of responsibility to act towards others in the way that they want to be treated. It poses both

benefecial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

and harmful effects to children because they are

nutured

help develop, help grow

nurtured

neutered

depending on the environment at home. Children figuring out on how

to make

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making

use of their free time helps them to develop independence and confidence in their own actions regardless of the consequences of those actions. It

also

gives them the avenue to

nuture

help develop, help grow

nurture

their creative abilities henceforth helps them to discover their talents which

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

unknown to them at

first

. I believe that children are

molded

shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)

moulded

both by internal and external factors depending on the nature and

nuture

help develop, help grow

nurture

nature

they grow in. Studies

shows

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show

have shown

that

majority

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the majority

of children that grew to be successful in their chosen fields were raised in influenced by positive engagement

to

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in

with

groups which

yeilds

be the cause or source of

yields

them to discover their strengths and weaknesses.

Thus it

Accept comma addition

Thus, it

helps them to be driven to better themselves to become the best versions of themselves. Helping them to learn and master themselves through their interaction with others gives the opportunity to develop their own sense of what and who they are

thus

they act upon what is right for them and for others. In conclusion, I strongly believe that exposing children to the external environment with other children will help them positively.