Today’s food travel thousands of miles before it reaches the customer. Some people say that it would be better for the economy and environment if people ate food produced from local farmers. Would the advantages of this idea outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people advocate that consuming local
food
would lead to a number of economic and environmental benefits. I personally believe that the drawbacks of this
idea would overshadow its merits.
On the one hand, the far-reaching benefits brought about by purchasing domestic food
are undeniable. Firstly
, when products are purchased and consumed locally, the local economic growth will be stimulated. More jobs will be generated and the local could earn more money from food
production. Secondly
, eating local grown food
has an important role to play in protecting the environment. In fact, transportation of food
around the world using airplanes
or ships could release carbon emissions into the environment. This
will trigger to severe environmental problems such
as global warming and air pollution. In contrast
, consuming domestic food
will help to reduce food
miles and therfore
, detrimental carbon dioxide emitted from transports will (used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
also
be mitigated.
Despite the aforementioned advantages, the negative impacts of consuming domestic food
should not be overlooked. To begin
with, the dominance of domestic food
will increase the price of food
. If this
were the case, many peole
, especially lower income households would (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
not afford to their
essential Suggestion
not afford their
food
daily. In addition
, consumers could have less choices of food
if locally grown food
hold
the monopoly. Suggestion
holds
As a result
, people will have fewer opportunities to experirence
traditional the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
food
and healthy
products from other regions. Suggestion
health
Besides
, the growing in the demanding of local food
force people to clear more forests for farming lands. The cumulative loss of forests is the main culprit of global warming and soil pollution.
In conclusion, eating more local food
has it
own benefits in terms of environment and economy. it is
it's
However
, I reckon that the drawbacks of this
idea will be more significant in the long term.Submitted by Andy on
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