Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

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Increasing demand
of
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for
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accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
and
traffic
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jam are
problem
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in
big city
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big cities
the big city
a big city
.
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Goverment
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Government
should encourage some
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bussines
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
basins
to
rural area
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a rural area
the rural area
rural areas
to solve the problems. There are many
anvantages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
of moving
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bussines
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
to rural area. The
first
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advantages is the
rurals
living in or characteristic of farming or country life
rural
areas will grows and the
second
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cities will decrease off
population so
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the population, so
the population so
the
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accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
demand and
traffic
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jam because the population
off
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of
citizens will not
increase
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. The
number
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of citizens will affected
to
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by
transportation and
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accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
facilities. The example is facilities which serve
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student
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the student
students
a student
. If the
number
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of
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student
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students
is not
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is not increasing
has not increased
is not increased
doesn't increase
does not increase
increase
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, the
number
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of
scholl
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schools
school
will not
also
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increase
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. Another
example if
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example, if
the
number
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of
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student
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students
is not
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is not increasing
has not increased
does not increase
doesn't increase
increase
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the transport facilities which is used by
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student
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students
the student
a student
to go to
scholl
an educational institution
school
will not
also
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increase
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so the
traffic
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jam will not happen. Moving
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bussines
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
business'
into rural areas
is not only give
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is not only giving
is not only given
has not only given
advantages but
also
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disadvantages. The disadvantages of
this
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action is the
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
must pay the builder contractor to
built
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build
the facilities in rural
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facilities in the rural
areas.
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Goverment
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Government
must prepare the
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money which
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money, which
will used to pay building contractor.
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Goverment
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The government
Government
can get
money
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from tax. The
tax which
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tax, which
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
may be billed is salary, vehicle, resort, hotel, and apartment tax. If we look the advantages and disadvantages
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
moving some
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bussines
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
basins
to rural
area we
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area, we
must see the saving
money
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of
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goverment
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the government
government
. If the
money
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of
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
is not enough, they must get
money
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quickly before the
problem
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in big cities is
unstopable
not capable of being stopped
unstoppable
.
This
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problem
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about
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accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
and
traffic
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is a great
problem
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in many
country
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countries
and
this
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problem
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can make many
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problem
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problems
in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
sectors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban sprawl, Traffic congestion, Decentralization, Economic diversification, Work-life balance, Sustainable development, Infrastructure, Connectivity, Skilled workforce, Supply chain, Green spaces, Urban-rural migration, Overcrowding, Economic disparity, Cultural isolation, Remote working, Commuter towns, Metropolitan, Commercial hub.
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