Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantages?
Increasing demand
of
Suggestion
for
accomodation
and making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
traffic
jam are problem
in big city
. Suggestion
big cities
the big city
a big city
Goverment
should encourage some Suggestion
Government
bussines
to a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
basins
rural area
to solve the problems.
There are many Suggestion
a rural area
the rural area
rural areas
anvantages
of moving the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
bussines
to rural area. The a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
first
advantages is the rurals
areas will grows and the living in or characteristic of farming or country life
rural
second
cities will decrease off population so
the Suggestion
the population, so
the population so
accomodation
demand and making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
traffic
jam because the population off
citizens will not connects a noun with the preceding word
of
increase
. The number
of citizens will affected to
transportation and Suggestion
by
accomodation
facilities. The example is facilities which serve making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
student
. If the Suggestion
the student
students
a student
number
of student
Suggestion
students
is not
Suggestion
is not increasing
has not increased
is not increased
doesn't increase
does not increase
increase
, the number
of scholl
will not Suggestion
schools
school
also
increase
. Another example if
the Accept comma addition
example, if
number
of student
Suggestion
students
is not
Suggestion
is not increasing
has not increased
does not increase
doesn't increase
increase
the transport facilities which is used by student
to go to Suggestion
students
the student
a student
scholl
will not an educational institution
school
also
increase
so the traffic
jam will not happen.
Moving bussines
into rural areas a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
business'
is not only give
advantages but Suggestion
is not only giving
is not only given
has not only given
also
disadvantages. The disadvantages of this
action is the goverment
must pay the builder contractor to the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
built
Suggestion
build
the facilities in rural
areas. Suggestion
facilities in the rural
Goverment
must prepare the Suggestion
Government
money which
will used to pay building contractor. Accept comma addition
money, which
Goverment
can get Suggestion
The government
Government
money
from tax. The tax which
Accept comma addition
tax, which
goverment
may be billed is salary, vehicle, resort, hotel, and apartment tax.
If we look the advantages and disadvantages the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
off
moving some connects a noun with the preceding word
of
bussines
to rural a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
basins
area we
must see the saving Accept comma addition
area, we
money
of goverment
. If the Suggestion
the government
government
money
of goverment
is not enough, they must get the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
money
quickly before the problem
in big cities is unstopable
. not capable of being stopped
unstoppable
This
problem
about accomodation
and making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
traffic
is a great problem
in many country
and Suggestion
countries
this
problem
can make many problem
in Suggestion
problems
another
sectors.not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
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