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Some people in developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibility towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Protecting the
environment
 and combating climate change is an hour of need and
this
 issue is gaining maximum traction among all the countries. According to me developing and developed nations, all play the crucial role in
this
 phenomenon. Without a qualm, the developed nations have enough resources to fight against climate change. They can
also
 help developing nature by facilitating the resources. The climate situation is worsening day by day. If there will not be adequate guidance from the developed nations to the developing nations than future generation will pay the price for sure. To quote an instance, USA being a developed nature is having adequate controls in place to have a harmony with nature.
However
 India & China are using natural resources with a view to appeasing the mindset of robust economic growth. Here USA can set up a control with India & China for
environment
 protection, India & China can
also
 leverage the policies which USA has in place for the protection of the
environment
. There is another perspective which is all countries should have the same responsibility towards protecting the
environment
 and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 certainly agree with the fact. Not only developed nations, in fact developing nations have the same roles and responsibilities to play in protecting the
environment
. One should not only rely on developing nations only though should fight hand in hand with developed nations.
for
Suggestion
For
 example, in developing nations public transport must be prioritized in order to decrease the carbon footprints, Or people should give
first
 preference to eco-friendly products,
such
 as paint, shoes
,
Accept space
,
vehicles and so on. In Conclusion, we cannot afford to take risks when Mother Nature is threatened. All countries should do their bit. Countries should revisit the policies wherever required or leverage the policies of other nations which have effective controls in place.
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