People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
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shouldn’t
move
to smaller regional areas.
For example
, we have the problems most commonly encountered by people in large cities.firstly one
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problem
which citizen in big cities Suggestion
problems
have
to confront is traffic jam.It is because the over-crowded Suggestion
has
population which
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population, which
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,
infrastructure can’t meet the accelerating of the vehicles on the roads.Accept space
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people’s daily commute
is affected negatively. The Suggestion
the people’s daily commute
second
reason is the air pollution caused by exhaust gas and dust. Being a big city
attracts large companies leading to smog production. In addition
, smog appeared not a small part because the amount of traffic is too large. In short, air pollution has a great impact on human health as well as a direct impact on daily life
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equally important issue is the issue of housing. In the big city there
are many slums, poor and abandoned places. Accept comma addition
city, there
In addition
, the degraded residential areas are also
a problem because the lack of water and electricity has profound effects on human health.
However
, to answer the government's question that encourages people to move
to smaller cities? My answer is no. There are many reasons to live in the big city
. First
, there are employment and experience opportunities in large companies located in the major city
centers
. Of course, working in big companies means that salary and bonuses are higher than those of small companies in the countryside. The an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
second
reason that everyone seems to be so familiar with is the inevitable services that are necessary in everyday life
. For example
, shopping malls, large restaurants, large medical centers
and high-end services help people relax more comfortably, which has a huge impact on people's an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
life
and health.last
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traveling
is the act of going from one place to another
travelling
also
a difficult problem for people who are working. living
in the countryside will make it difficult for them to Suggestion
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move
to the city
to work.
In conclusion, there are many difficulties that people have to confront when living in the
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city, but
city
but the government should not encourage people to move
to other smaller townsSubmitted by Andy on
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