People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Large cities
bring
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brings
about difficulties
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of
city
dwellers to deal with in their daily
life
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This
essay will discuss some major problems
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and in my opinion
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
shoun’t
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shouldn’t
encourage people to
move
to smaller regional areas.
For example
, we have the problems most commonly encountered by people in large cities.
firstly one
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Firstly, one
Firstly one
of the
problem
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problems
which citizen in big cities
have
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has
to confront is traffic jam.It is because the over-crowded
population which
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population, which
lead to significantly increased of vehicles.
Therefore
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infrastructure can’t meet the accelerating of the vehicles on the roads.
As a result
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people’s daily commute
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the people’s daily commute
is affected negatively. The
second
reason is the air pollution caused by exhaust gas and dust. Being a big
city
attracts large companies leading to smog production.
In addition
, smog appeared not a small part because the amount of traffic is too large. In short, air pollution has a great impact on human health as well as a direct impact on daily
life
.
Last
equally important issue is the issue of housing. In the big
city there
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city, there
are many slums, poor and abandoned places.
In addition
, the degraded residential areas are
also
a problem because the lack of water and electricity has profound effects on human health.
However
, to answer the government's question that encourages people to
move
to smaller cities? My answer is no. There are many reasons to live in the big
city
.
First
, there are employment and experience opportunities in large companies located in the major
city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
. Of course, working in big companies means that salary and bonuses are higher than those of small companies in the countryside. The
second
reason that everyone seems to be so familiar with is the inevitable services that are necessary in everyday
life
.
For example
, shopping malls, large restaurants, large medical
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
and high-end services help people relax more comfortably, which has a huge impact on people's
life
and health.
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Last
but not least,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
is
also
a difficult problem for people who are working.
living
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Living
in the countryside will make it difficult for them to
move
to the
city
to work. In conclusion, there are many difficulties that people have to confront when living in th
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city, but
city
but the government should not encourage people to
move
to other smaller towns
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