The graphs below show the growth in wages within the G7 Nations between 2000-2007 and 2008-2012.
Both figures below reveal the payrolls of how a special and rich group of countries during two periods, 2000 to 2007, and 2008 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that the UK started the series with highest
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the highest
over
5%, followed by the US with Change preposition
of over
rates
near 3,5 in
and Canada with 3% in the first period. European nations showed started with a minor rateChange preposition
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but stayed more stable during all periods, except Italy. Japan oscillated your wage Remove the comma
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rates
all time that was analysed.
Canada, the US, and the UK demonstrated a constant and strong trend to grow in the first period. But, later just Canada keeping
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kept
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positive tendency. The UK plunges your
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rates
through for years
and achieved negative rates
as -2% in 2011. The US in the same period registered two negatives
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negative
years
and a small growth from 2009 to 2011.
The European G7 nation's measures had majority
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a majority
increased
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Italy
. France and Germany have a great performance during all time they registered only three Change preposition
for Italy
years
with a negative rate, France in 2008 with -02% and Germany with imperceptive decreases near 0,1% in 2004 and 2005. The Italians
numbers described a distinct situation, Replace the word
Italian
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context represents several oscillations over the years
with positive picks with 2% in 2004 and droops like
2011 with -2%.
Japan, the only Asian nation in the G7, exhibited similar behaviour Change preposition
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Italians, Change preposition
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with inconstant
rates
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up as in 2011 with +3% and other moments Wrong verb form
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2001
with -2%.Change preposition
in 2001
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