Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.

Since the industrial revolution due

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the high emission

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of

carbon gas, the greenhouse effects has been increasing and it is harmful

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the climate changes. Some people believe that each person as an individual should work to prevent

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environmental problems. While

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others believe

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goververnment

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government

and industries responsibility. In my opinion

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all parts are

responsable

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responsible

to prevent environmental issues and in

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essay

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I will recommend some suggestions which the governments, global companies and the individuals could to do to prevent

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global warming. The main reason that humans are

responsable

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responsible

is because of the way how they

disposal

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dispose

of waste.

For example

,

Plastic

is extremely toxic to the earth and it could not be

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discarded

together with food. The aliments are biodegradable,

this

means that it will be consumed by germs and insects. While

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plastic

takes longer to be consumed by the earth and it must

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be

discarted

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discarded

in the right place to be reusable and recycle. Another good practice is

carry

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carrying

on

they

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their

own reusable bag at the grocery shops. It will

reduced

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reduce

the

use

of

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plastic bag and as

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consequence reduced the production of it. It is because

plastic

not only

pollute

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pollutes

the ecosystem but

also

the released

of

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carbon gas to produce it is extremely harmful to

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global warming.

On the other hand

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gorvernments

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governments

government's

need to be concerned

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environment protection. The authorities must give some alternatives to the population reduced

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gas pollution. In Melbourne

for example

, the public transports are free at the

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centre

areas. It incentives the residents

use less

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useless

car and

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reduced the emission of carbon gas. The industries are the

biggiest

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biggest

pollutants of atmospheric air in the world,

specially

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especially

the meat industries. As a solution to reduced their impacts

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recommend the

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recycle

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recycling

paper for worksheets, they

also

could adopt a region to plant more trees and

futhermore

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furthermore

they could give as a donation a percentage of their profit to an ONGs like Greenpeace which works to prevent the environmental issues.

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These

measures would reduce the global industries harmful impact in the world. In conclusion, dispose of waste correctly,

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reducing

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plastic

bags, avoid the

use

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incentive of plant trees and donations to charities which care about environmental problems are some ways that I believe each individual, Industries and the government are responsible to think about to prevent the climate change.