Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

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working environment is moving so fast. Some people think that there is not a good adjustment for some industries to replace their experienced old

staff

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with inexperienced new

staff

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. I totally agree with

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notion. In

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essay, I

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discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. There have some benefits for

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industry to keep their old employees who

is

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are

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experience

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experienced

in the

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work force

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workforce

.

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, they have

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a

knowledge of their

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because

of

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they

work

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for a long time in the same industry.

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means they

are fully recognize

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fully recognize

their duty what they do and how to do it in the best way.

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, as a phlebotomist

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,

they

are not only need

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do not only need

to know the

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work flow

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workflow

and

also

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have the

experience

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of

how to blood draw for the patient.

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,

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experienced old

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can help the inexperienced employee by their

experience

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.

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,

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an

old employee

have

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has

experience

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to deal with

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a

different situation,

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is because they have

working

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to work

in the same industry for a period.

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, they have

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the

ability to deal with

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a

varied situation when the new

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cannot handle the condition.

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, there

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have some drawbacks if a factory

hold

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holds

too much old

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staff

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stuff

. The best example is young individuals will have

less

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fewer

opportunities for advancement. They are more likely to get the career prospect because

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they fully

understanding

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understand

the duty.

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old individuals may be lost their job enthusiasm. The evidence is they are

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for the same job for a long period, so they may

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feel

stuffy rather than the young individuals. In conclusion,

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young individuals may less their chance of promotion and they full of passion for their

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.

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, I strongly believe that people who have

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experience

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in their special field is necessary for

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an

industary

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industry

to keep their quality and they can control some situation in their

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work place

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workplace

.