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Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities.To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view

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In recent decades, the researchers have studied the importance of
group
 cognition. Indeed in my opinion individuals can enhance their Intellectual skill by engaging themselves in
group
-games and team activities. In
this
 essay,I will examine how research in team activities and
group
-games support
this
 view.
Group
 cognition helps boosting the skillset of co-ordination, reading details and attention among the Individuals. Many researchers have studied the performance of
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rain wherein they studied what part of
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rain functions highest while performing different activities.It was noticeable to see that every activity focused on single-part of
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rain to give reflex for the related activity.
For instance
,while climbing and getting the Apple from to of the 15 feet wall it showed remarkable functionality in the right side of
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rain while playing chess the left side of the
brain
 showed reflex at a greater speed.
However
 when they studied same individuals performing a task involving putting up a puzzle, running through a forested area,reaching out to a rope untying it and jumping on the other side of the water pound and
then
 running to the finishing line, the
brain
 of these Individuals showed both parts of
brain
 performing at an alarming speed. The researches are many and the results are all the same and each of it claims that Individual Intellect and other skills ameliorate while working in
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roup. The schools, offices and other corporates now focus on making Individuals do some
group
 activities and help them enhance their Intellectual skill set by reading the details of activities and people involved with them in those activities, thereby strengthening their
brain power
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. The aforementioned arguments and examples show that the
group
 - cognition revamps the Intellectual skills of Individuals. It brings coordination in both sides f
brain
 performance, thereby enhancing
brain power
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • intellectual skills
  • group activities
  • collaborative learning
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • communication
  • interpersonal skills
  • diverse perspectives
  • creativity
  • individual study
  • personal reflection
  • autonomy
  • learning styles
  • approaches
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