When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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people tend to believe in high status and having a luxurious life. They are more fascinated by upper-class society and want to be part of it. So , I personally think that more focus of today's generation is on the monetary benefits of their career. Salary is one of the most important criteria while choosing the
job
,
however
, there are some other criteria as well which cannot be ignored. In the developing country like India, we can often see that students are into the subjects which can be turned into higher-paying jobs in future, rather than in the subjects they really have interest for.
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attern is seen among Indian students to opt for science and maths over other common subjects like art and literature. By doing
this
they can become engineer, doctor and have many high-end earnings than of a writer or a painter.
Also
, the trend of going to developed countries for higher studies,
job
and settlement can be seen among youngsters.
This
way they focus more on higher earnings and better standards of living in future.
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, other factors
such
as
job
satisfaction , personal health, work environment ,
job
security and work-life balance
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ignificant role in a
job
. These factors cannot be ignored but they can be judged only when the
job
has been started , while at the time of joining salary can only be judged.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consideration
  • sole factor
  • financial stability
  • security
  • motivating factor
  • dissatisfaction
  • demotivation
  • job satisfaction
  • overall well-being
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • flexible working hours
  • vacations
  • career growth opportunities
  • skill development
  • advancement
  • determining factor
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