You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Manager, I am writing

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letter to seek your permission for a week off from my job routine to prepare for the Agile

exam

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conducted by the Scaled Agile Incorporation

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Sunday. As you are aware, I am preparing for the agile

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for more than 3 months now and

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I have booked my

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slot.

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, it would be great if you can allow me to take

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time to prepare for my

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, as I am working currently on the project management role,

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will be an added advantage that even we can showcase the same to our clients as they are keen on the agile processes.

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, during my

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I will ask Agnes to work on my tasks as she

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some bandwidth so that there are no delays in project delivery due

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my unavailability.

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I will extend my time during the weekends to cover the pending reports. I look forward to

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a positive response from you. Thanks

Srinithi

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Submitted by Srinithi Ramesh on Tue Sep 29 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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The Closing

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. Several Nations have observed an enormous increase in crime amid youngsters