The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
diagram
shows different components of a wave
energy
machine
and the process of how
energy
is generated. The
second
diagram
shows two wave
energy
machines with different location options. In the first
diagram
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we can see how water enters into the
machine
, heats up, evaporates into the air and rises in an upward direction after going through the chambers and a turbine where electricity is produced and
then
cold air flows in the
machine
from above and sinks. A comparison is shown between
two
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the two
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machines in the
second
diagram
. The one which is located uphill seems to generate lower units of
energy
than the
machine
which is located downhill because it is exposed to smaller waves. Small wave
energy
machine
appears to have lower installation costs
that
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than
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the
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apply
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large waves
energy
machine
.
Therefore
, one must
chose
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the location based on their requirements.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diagram, energy, machine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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