The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
diagram
shows different components of a wave energy
machine
and the process of how energy
is generated. The second
diagram
shows two wave energy
machines with different location options.
In the first diagram
we can see how water enters into the Add a comma
,diagram
machine
, heats up, evaporates into the air and rises in an upward direction after going through the chambers and a turbine where electricity is produced and then
cold air flows in the machine
from above and sinks.
A comparison is shown between two
machines in the Correct article usage
the two
second
diagram
. The one which is located uphill seems to generate lower units of energy
than the machine
which is located downhill because it is exposed to smaller waves. Small wave energy
machine
appears to have lower installation costs that
Correct word choice
than
the
large waves Correct article usage
apply
energy
machine
.
Therefore
, one must chose
the location based on their requirements.Change the verb form
choose
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