The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

diagram

shows different components of a wave

energy

machine

and the process of how

energy

is generated. The

second

diagram

shows two wave

energy

machines with different location options. In the first

diagram

Add a comma

,diagram

show examples

we can see how water enters into the

machine

, heats up, evaporates into the air and rises in an upward direction after going through the chambers and a turbine where electricity is produced and

then

cold air flows in the

machine

from above and sinks. A comparison is shown between

two

Correct article usage

the two

show examples

machines in the

second

diagram

. The one which is located uphill seems to generate lower units of

energy

than the

machine

which is located downhill because it is exposed to smaller waves. Small wave

energy

machine

appears to have lower installation costs

that

Correct word choice

than

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

large waves

energy

machine

Therefore

, one must

chose

Change the verb form

choose

show examples

the location based on their requirements.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words diagram, energy, machine with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

143 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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