The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

diagram

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shows different components of a wave

energy

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machine

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and the process of how

energy

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is generated. The

second

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diagram

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shows two wave

energy

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machines with different location options. In the first

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diagram

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,diagram

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we can see how water enters into the

machine

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, heats up, evaporates into the air and rises in an upward direction after going through the chambers and a turbine where electricity is produced and

then

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cold air flows in the

machine

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from above and sinks. A comparison is shown between

two

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the two

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machines in the

second

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diagram

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. The one which is located uphill seems to generate lower units of

energy

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than the

machine

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which is located downhill because it is exposed to smaller waves. Small wave

energy

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machine

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appears to have lower installation costs

that

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than

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the

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apply

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large waves

energy

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machine

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Therefore

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, one must

chose

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choose

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the location based on their requirements.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words diagram, energy, machine with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

143 words

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