Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The reason why we have to study
history
is if we know what happened in the past and how they solved the problems, we would learn a lesson from our ancestors. We can't say anything without
history
. How could we develop our technology
this
much is many people have already undergone trial and error. On the other hands, science and technology is
also
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ery important knowledge to live in
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1st century. Nowadays, we can find so many things that are related to computer programming in our life.
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, most
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eople have
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their own
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not only adults but
also
kids.
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phone is an appropriate thing that we can recognize how much development we have made in a decade. In my opinion, I would like to say we got to focus on scientific technique than
history
even though I do agree that learning an example from the past experiences is
also
important.
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has been changing so fast and we will be face to so many dangerous situations which caused by technical
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,
such
as new kind of virus, abnormal climate etc. That means there is no way to solve without
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cientific process. Everything is connected to scientific technology. At
this
moment, every
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in the world
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from COVID-19 which is the worst virus ever. The way we can deviate from the virus is vaccination. Making
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accine
also
needs biological knowledge. For
this
fact alone, we can realize
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how much worth studying science is. In conclusion, I'm not saying we don't need to learn
history
. Building extensive knowledge of science is a little more
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important
than focusing on the things that we already passed.
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