A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that work satisfaction is important than a hefty salary.
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essay totally disagrees with that statement. According to me, high salaried positions are directly affecting people's stress adversely and steers towards various fitness issues
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as anxiety. Whereas, employment happiness stays above the money earned People on higher positions are having finite time to perform their duties and achieve their goals which lead them towards serious well-being issues. Most of the high paid employee's responsibilities are making them stressed heavily and they get body disorders like blood pressure disorder. My uncle Raj boasted about the high salary, whereas he was having a satisfactory job. With the high profile job, he was not able to cater
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its needs and with the uncomfortable experiences, he had to quit the job and returned to the previous one. Work satisfaction helps to have a relaxed and peaceful mind, along with better physical and mental health. In a relaxed environment, anyone can contribute well and improve overall productivity. It allows employees to spend quality time in leisure, with family and friends. Having
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imited amount of personal time at work allows any individual to have a better work-life balance. Any location that gives better work-life balance can yield valuable outcome professionally and eventually to an organization. To conclude, high paid workers are suffering from hypertension health problems, and one of the reasons is having a highly result oriented stressful jobs.
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, people with a satisfying profession are having a better work-life balance. In my opinion, I prefer to have a low paid profession with low stress and highly satisfiable position.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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