You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear

Mr.

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Kaith, I received your invitation to a job fair at Rayat bhara college in Chandigarh. Thank you so much for choosing me for

this

work.

However

, I am extremely sorry that I would not be able to attend these interviews due to a meeting with my office higher authorities on 27 March. Certainly, I am promoted to

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apply

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Assistant Manager. Recently, my company has sighed a new project from a USA company and I am going to the USA to attend a meeting for the final project dealing. I apologize for not coming on the mentioned day, I am free after the

31th

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of March. Please let me know if I can help with the

scheduled interviews or any college fair.

Besides

this

, could you let me know the start as well as the ending time of the interview? So that I can manage my whole work schedule

accordingly

. For any query or issue please contact me on 0383772737. Look forward

for

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your prompt response, your faithful, John

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

170 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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