People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, with the development of the internet and technologies, we can buy things without going to the shopping mall and
also
have various ways to communicate, to "talk" to other people without waiting for weeks to receive a friend's letter or meeting them
face
to
face
. To make all of these changes happened, lots of talented people, our scientists, researchers, and engineers have worked so hard to create incredible technologies. Now we do everything "online"; using your smartphone to order foods, clothes, or even a new car; talking to your friends from thousands of kilometres away. All of these technologies and tools made our modern
life
is more convenient, but those techs
also
create problems that we never had to deal with before. In my opinion, I think
this
circumstance is both a positive or negative development. Lots of people would agree that now we have a
life
's more wonderful and colourful than we had in the past - online
life
.
For example
, you don't have to go to a foreign country to see their beautiful scenery, discover their culture. Just use your computer and your gadgets, you can go, can see, and learn whatever you want to see, to learn. When you miss your relative, your family, just pick up your
phone
, your parents are on the line. When you'
re
starving, making a
phone
call and the food's on its way. You don't have to leave your home to make some new friends, thanks to the social networks.
On the other hand
, some people argue that we are losing our real emotion, real
life
, the real part of a human being. We'
re
sitting right
next
to each other, facing your
phone
, "talking" to others via your
phone
instead
of talking
face
to
face
. We'
re
eating at home all alone,
instead
of gathering our friends and find something new to eat together. We'
re
watching some people's hiking on youtube
instead
of climbing on the mountain all by ourselves. It seems like we forget to enjoy our
life
. In conclusion, I think all of the technologies, which help us to do a lot of things online, are a positive development, but it can cause some issues that we have to
face
and deal with.
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