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Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. how do you think this had changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

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Nowadays, it is hard to
work
 without the help of technological appliances. Those gadgets bring lots of advantages to us that improving our efficiency.
Nevertheless
, with the convenience of technology, there are some drawbacks in terms of dependent on it. The up-to-date appliances have totally transformed a company’s working style and brought many benefits.
Firstly
, computers have more function and cutting-edge equipment. Employees can enhance their working speed.
Secondly
, it is more convenient to contact with customers and colleagues by email, message, or skype. Those are dramatically decreasing the waiting
time
 between them.
Lastly
, there is no distance
with
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 the video call. It is easy to
held
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 a video conference without the limit of border and
time
. Global organizations or companies are received positive impacts from it.
On the other hand
, some adverse effects developing with the technology
also
. There is no exactly after working
time
. Sometimes, works still receive messages from their customers or managers when they are off
work
 of on holiday. It will increase the stress for them and form a
cultural
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 of working overtime.
Besides
, it is harder to focus on their
work
 result from different kinds of notice including messages, emails, or even social
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media
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medias
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.
This
 will reduce the efficiency and quality of
work
. At the same
time
, people will lose the negotiation skill and social ability. Those causing negative effects
to
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 the companies and employees. I believe that those tech-savvy products improve our working environment and change our working methods.
However
, it did influence some aspects and make some disadvantages.
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