Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary than ordinary workers. Employers' organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, large organizations hire their boards of directors at higher compensation from their

market

value. Human resource department

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is a necessary step to attract the best.

talent

in their management

team

. I believe, it is an essential

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for global companies to attract and retain the

right

talent

to maintain the

competive

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competitive

advantage in the

market

.

To begin

with

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diverse

exprience

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experience

and knowledge comes at a cost. Many

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companies

wants

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to hire the best

market

leaders to provide their guidance and share their experience with

team

members. Their

talent

will help them to bring more

business

.

For instance

, In initial years of Apple, Apple's board of directors fired Steve Jobs, after that company suffered

huge

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loses till they were forced to bring him back on board directors. After

,

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he joined Apple again, it went onto

become

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world's most profitable technology manufacturer. Another reason

of

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spending huge amount of sum on

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talent

to have

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ompetitive edge over their competitors. Every

companies

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wants

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to have an advantage and people are the biggest

assest

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asset

assets

of any organization. It is very important to have

r

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ight people in our company to have

s

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uccessful

business

.

For instance

, A good leader can lift his

team

to new

hieghts

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heights

,

wheras

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whereas

a weak leader can run us out of the

business

.

Thus

, investing in

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ight people for our

business

is essential. Companies are willing to pay extra to bring

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ight people on board to develop their

team

and lift them towards success. In conclusion, I believe it is

accute

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accurate

acute

to pay more to hire the

talent

and bring aboard on their

team

. These expensive steps are taken for

business

growth and expansion, and in hope that they will dominate their

market

with

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ight minds on their

team

.