You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter, » explain why you are writing » express concern about the missing card » ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about a missing debit
card
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from your
bank
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that I
supposed
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to receive with an acknowledgement letter. unfortunately, yesterday I received a
torned
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torn
turned
envolve
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involve
evolve
where the
card
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was missing. I have a savings account at your
bank
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and my account no is 457436. I claimed
an
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debit
card
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against my account two weeks back and I was informed by the
bank
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to receive that through courier. Yesterday, I received a letter on my mailing address but to my
surprise
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the
envolve
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involve
was a bit
torned
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turned
torn
and there was no
card
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inside.
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, I am writing
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letter to report
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insident
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incident
as it could be proved dangerous for the
bank
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as well as for me. In
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circumstance, please terminate all kinds of
trasactions
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transactions
by
this
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card
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to ensure safety and send me a new one. Yours sincerely, Taslima
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • acknowledge receipt
  • compromised security
  • unauthorized transactions
  • identity theft
  • reissue
  • secure (the account)
  • fraudulent activity
  • account holder
  • security measures
  • customer service
  • follow-up
  • discrepancy
  • escalate the issue
  • trace the delivery
  • account security
  • financial risk
  • confidential
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