Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Many debates on the negative impact of our activities on our ecosystem. Where one group believes our action consequences are irreversible while others are still hopeful for that if we work together as a community, we will be able to save our
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essay will look into both sides of the argument and will opine my opinion in conclusion. Global warming is an evident phenomenon happening across the globes. We all are witnessing its effects on our daily lives. Weather on earth is getting intense each passing day and it all can be traced back to human activities.
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, Amazon, a lung of Earth is been cut down by corporations to capture more land space to build new cities.
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, Human greed to earn more money is sabotaging our surroundings.
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, over-fishing has been rising issues. People are overfishing without giving a break to fish to breeds.
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, it results in the elimination of many sea species.
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ecessary steps to control climate change.
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decade, we have seen
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ew wave of people being mindful of using earth resources that influenced many corporations like H&M has taken initiatives to come up with eco-friendly and sustainable fashion line for their consumers.
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initiative has been widely popular among the consumers as they see it as the right step in conversing the environment.
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, on an international level, France has created a Green Peace deal which has been signed by over 80 countries to reform their laws to eliminate the greenhouse emission and move towards cleaner energy to preserve the
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caused huge damage to our environment, because of us the O-zone layer has a huge hole which contributes to major environmental changes. Though
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people have taken measures to reserve
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earth, we can able to achieve it. But, governments need to take a lead in preserving the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Irrevocable damage
  • Urbanization
  • Deforestation
  • Pollution
  • Habitat loss
  • Extinction
  • Industrial development
  • Conservation efforts
  • Wildlife protection laws
  • Public awareness
  • Sustainable practices
  • Renewable resources
  • Eco-friendly technologies
  • Biotechnology
  • Restore ecosystems
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