The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Learning is a long-time process. Even though visiting abroad has some issues, the benefits of
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huge. When exposing to a novel environment,
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nowledge and skills of the scholars. The
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international exposure.
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, students from the various part of the world would be seen there and
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from the
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under a global exchange
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would get more opportunity than others. Eventually, they would be prepared to face many challenges they might encounter later in the career path.
However
, despite the above-mentioned positive aspects,
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has some negative sides as well. The one obvious problem is that the financial burden since the cost of living is so huge in overseas which may be unable to afford.
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. many
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, prefer to opt
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type of degree course since they can learn many things compared to any traditional education.
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ourse than other types. In conclusion, while it is
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thought that enrolling a graduate course, which offers a foreign exchange class has some drawbacks, the positives aspect is paramount. It is recommended that every student should get
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pportunity as
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repare them to encounter various challenges in the future.
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