Your friend wants to visit your town. Write a letter to him giving information about the town. In your letter include : 1. what is the good time for visit? 2. describe some interesting places to visit 3. what accomodation is better for his stay?

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Dear Abhi, Hope you are doing well. I can't tell you how excited I got after reading your

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letter about your travel plan to Mumbai

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year and I'm writing

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letter to share with you some important information about the town which may help you in booking and preparing your itinerary. You should plan your trip somewhere between July to September

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since during that time you can experience the world-famous rainy season of the

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, the

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is surrounded by mountains and in the rainy season, the overall view of Mumbai becomes

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! You can start your trip from Mumbai Devi temple, which is an ancient temple, around 200 years old.

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place is believed to be protecting the

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since the time of its inception. You'll be surprised to know that the

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is named on

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Temple.

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visit India-Gate which is again a famous monument here. Travellers from all across the country come to specially visit here. Later during the weekends, you can visit some beaches attached to the town, popular for their authentic coastal cuisines. I suggest you book

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accommodation as it is nearest to all the suggested spots and is known for its traditional Indian ambience. Can't wait to meet you here. Love, Sweta Singh

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

220 words

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Your friend wants to visit your town. Write a letter to him giving information about the town. In your letter include : 1. what is the good time for visit? 2. describe some interesting places to visit 3. what accomodation is better for his stay?

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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter

increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore,sport lessons must be compulsory in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A person's worth nowadays, seems to be judged according to social statues and material possession. Old- fashion values such as honor, kindness and trust no longer seem important. Do what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?