The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of the amount of using
water
for
different
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reason
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in six different
countries
.
Overall
, most of the
countries
used
water
for
agricultural
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whereas
in
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North America and Europe used it for industry the most. In North America, 48% of
water
was used for industry.
This
is followed by the figure for
agricutural
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agricultural
usage
(39%) and domestic
usage
(13%) .
Similary
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Similarly
, in Europe, the proportion of using
water
for
indusry
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industry
was 53% which
consitst
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consist
consists
the most of the pie chart.
On the other hand
, the percentage of
agriculture
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usage
and domestic
usage
were
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32% and 18%
respectivaly
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respectively
.
However
, other
countries
were different from these two
countries
. Using
water
for
agricultureIn
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agriculture
in South East Asia and Central Asia, Africa made up more than 80% which was the most of the pie chart. South Africa
also
shows
high
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percentage of using
water
for Agriculture (70%)
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, countries, usage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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