You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Mr.
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Dunphy, I am writing
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letter to inquire about some electrical products. I recently came across your shop and observed it has plenty of options to choose from. I am planning to upgrade my kitchen with modern appliances. I am interested to buy
juicer
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and food processor. Juicer must have
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container and should come with easy fixing. For
food
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will
preffer
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one with meat mincing and vegetable chopping
option
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. It should
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have
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jug for
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. can you provide me with details of all the options for these two appliances and
also
the price. I like Kenwood products. Can the shop order online the requested model on my behalf, if it is not readily available
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I will be out of town for one week so
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would like to inquire after placing the order how long you can hold the item for me. Looking forward to hearing from you yours sincerely Saba Shaheen
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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