Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam.’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
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The Industrial
revolution
happened a century ago brought us the luxury lifestyle and the prime example is owning a car. Change the capitalization
Revolution
Although
it was a status symbol, people were not encouraged to have vehicles due to its less affordability and availability. Things started to change c
ouple of decades ago, more consumers made car prices more affordable. It created unexpected consequences which Change the article
a
is
Change the verb form
are
t
raffic jam. As an introduction, I would brief various prospects of increased Add an article
a
traffic
around the world and way to control it.
First
and foremost, traffic
jam is a major concern around metro cities, even-though
the usage of private vehicle by an individual has been rapidly increasing and it helps to boost domestic economy by providing direct and direct jobs to millions of people. Correct your spelling
even though
Secondly
, owning a vehicle is mandatory in today’s work driven
circumstance to be at work on time. Add a hyphen
work-driven
Further
to brief it, transport
services are not adequate in general and to reach c
ertain destination, it might need to get Add an article
a
a connection services
which could be a big hurdle. To avoid Correct the article-noun agreement
connection services
a connection service
such
circumstances, people prefer to use o
wn car or bike, rather than Add a pronoun
their
a public
Remove the article
public transport
a means of public transport
a mode of public transport
transport
.
True to the statement, more traffic
creates more pollution and it should be addressed in a fast manner. Firstly
, Governments around the world should analyze the cause of increasing vehicle congestion and planning common transport
services according. Most
population would prefer those servicesAdd an article
The most
,
if it provides a comfortable ride. Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
, tax and parking charges would benefit the Government as well as reduce the flow. As an example, Train services in India is a vastly used transport
mode due to its convenience, inexpensive and reaches on-time.
As a conclusion, I would assert the high volume of movement is a real big concern and implementing a
balanced measures would reduce over a period of time.Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
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